I sharing my short writing

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Topic : Environmental protection

Do you think I will environmental protection? Nowadays, Hong Kong pollution problem is very serious. For example greenhouse effect and air pollution. In this article, I will talk about air pollution and water pollution.
        First of all, there are many environmental problems in Hong Kong. New, I will talk air pollution because this pollution in Hong Kong is very serious. Hong Kong people always drive the car, will carbon dioxide. Some people will feel disgusting and may be sick.
        Apart from that, water pollution is also serious in Hong Kong. The second problem, I will talk water pollution because Hong Kong people can not protect marine life. Since Hong Kong people don't protect marine life will endangered species.
        In order to protect the environment, we should use public transport reduce drive the car to improve air pollution problem. We can conserve energy and use energy-efficient bulb. Face to water pollution problem, the government could using greener methods of waste disposal reduce people from rubbish.
        All in all, it is important to protect the environment on your side, cutting down on consumption, recycling domestic waste, conserving energy and using cleaner fuels. The pollution problem is very serious because aftermath people will dead.

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holicmit

A good trial. Keep it up!
I think you'd better read more

宗-__-

lack of good idea

vaz

lol at least u r trying

chiuandy123

Start embarking on English newspaper or book may enhance your english level.
lonelyhunter 發表於 18-4-2013 20:21

   Yep, it is definitely an effective way to learn English

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    Thank your recommendation, I will try

lonelyhunter

Start embarking on English newspaper or book may enhance your english level.

Kamma

You didn't tell why we have to protect our environment.  
e.g. What is the adverse impacts of pollution?  How pollution may affect our life?

chiuandy123

Thank you Reply,
I English is really not good, but I will never gave up learning English
Re chiuandy ...
一碌木 發表於 25-3-2013 19:41

   It doesn't really matter. But you should practice more so as to enhance your English level! Add oil!

一碌木

Thank you Reply,
I English is really not good, but I will never gave up learning English
Re chiuandy123 : I am F.5 student,you think I writing is what from degree?